I have rekindled my love of writing thanks to the Writers 750 contest. Each month has a theme and key elements which must be included in the story, and, most difficult for me, especially, is the 1,500 word limit. I had fun idea for October's entry, however, it was impossible to tell the whole story within the word limitation, so I asked permission to write the story in two parts.
Devil's Moon is a story about the supernatural and two opposing factions. Part one, subtitled The Pack, tells the story of a young lycanthrope coming of age, as it were. Part two, The Hunters, tells the tale of the human family tasked with eradicating the Pack.
Together the stories tell a strange tale of redemption.
I hope you enjoy Devil's Moon:
Devil's Moon Pt 1
The Pack
Benny sauntered up to a group of Freshmen and threw down his challenge. “Hey losers, I bet none of you can beat me in a softest punch contest.” Benny, a Junior, was known for being a trickster and a bit of a bully around campus, but the newest group of Freshmen had not been around long enough to know of Benny’s antics. Sean, the smallest of the group, asked, “What is that?” Benny said, with a leer, “We see who can throw the softest punch, shoot, I’ll even let you go first.” Sean, looking excited to connect with an upperclassman in his new school said, “Sure, why not?” as he walked up to Benny, who probably outweighed him by at least a hundred pounds. With the gentlest of jabs, Sean’s fist barely made contact with Benny’s arm. Benny reared back and punched Sean in his arm with everything he had. Sean landed on his side about a foot and a half away, clutching his arm and using all of his will power to not start crying. Benny laughed, “Congratulations kid, you won!” and headed off to his next class.
Sean’s humiliation was almost Benny’s undoing. By lunch time, word of Benny’s little gag had gotten to the Dean of boys, Jack Carlton, who was waiting for Benny outside the school cafeteria. Mr. Carlton placed a hand on Benny’s shoulder and with a painfully firm grip directed him to the administration offices. Benny did not scare easily, but at the moment a sheen of sweat appeared over his brow. “What’s the problem Mr. Carlton?” Benny asked, attempting to sound innocent of any possible wrongdoing. The fact of the matter was this little visit may have been prompted by any one of a half dozen pranks and misdemeanors Benny had orchestrated, or at least participated in, the past several days. Mr. Carlton remained silent until he escorted Benny into his office, where two police officers stood waiting. “Have a seat Benny”, Mr. Carlton said as he walked behind his desk and took a seat.
“I understand you assaulted a student this morning.” Benny’s mouth dropped open as he attempted to wrap his mind around the accusation. “No sir, I never assaulted anybody, there must be some misunderstanding!” Benny knew there were plenty of things he deserved to answer for, but being accused of assault took him completely by surprise. Mr. Carlton leaned forward and looked Benny in the eye, “Well, Benny, there was a hallway full of witnesses, who will happily testify in court, that they saw you punch Sean Prescott so hard you almost broke his arm.” “I was just fooling around with the kid, I swear, I don’t even know him!” Benny protested. At that, one of the police officers stepped forward and told Benny, “Stand up, turn around and place your hands behind your back.” Benny complied and felt the cold steel on his wrists as the police officer handcuffed him.
Now sobbing, Benny asked Mr. Carlton if he could call his mom. “We’ll get to that, Benny, I want to explain something to you first.” Mr. Carlton stepped to the front of his desk, crossed his arms and asked Benny, “How old are you?” “I’m seventeen, sir”, he mumbled. “When do you turn eighteen, son?” Not for another eight months, Sir.” Mr. Carlton looked hard at Benny and asked him, “You like how those handcuffs feel?” “No sir, I don’t like it one bit.” “Good, you got eight months to get yourself together and figure out what you want life to look like for you. Once you turn eighteen, if you so much as lay a finger on another kid in this school, I will have you arrested and believe me, I don’t care how tough you think you are, an eighteen year old kid in jail will not fare very well, you understand me?” Benny could only nod his head as snot and tears covered his face.
Mr. Carlton nodded his head to the officer who cuffed Benny and the policeman removed the cuffs. The two officers nodded to the Dean as they took their leave. Benny’s mom, Wanda, who had been in another room listening, entered the office, staring daggers at her wayward son. Dean Carlton stood up and walked next to Wanda. “You will be suspended for one week and you will be expected to keep up with all your school assignments during that time. I will be keeping my eye on you Benny. We can be the best of friends or bitter enemies, that is completely up to you.”
“Go wait in the car Benny,” Wanda directed as she turned to face Mr. Carlton. Carlton rubbed his face displaying his weariness, “Of all the kids in this school he could have picked on he had to go after a Prescott.” Wanda’s eyes grew large, “When did a Prescott start coming to this school?” “He’s a first year freshman, just got here at the beginning of the year. I guess I should have warned the Pack.” “Ya think?” Wanda spat out. “It’s because of a Prescott I have been raising that kid by myself for the last ten years, so, how good did he give it to him, anyway?” “Well, he gave him a pretty good shot, actually, kid’s stronger than he realizes. It’s odd he is such a late bloomer.” Wanda looked toward the window, “Oh I don’t think it will be too long now, he’s been growling in his sleep, so I’d say he’s probably only a moon cycle or two away.”
“I hope you understand why I took such drastic measures with Benny, we have to maintain the truce and I wanted to make sure the Prescotts understood this was an unfortunate coincidence. I have no doubt we could eliminate the Prescotts once and for all, but it would surely expose us and we’d be hunted to the ends of the earth. The truce is the only thing that keeps us alive” Wanda sighed, “I understand Jack, I just wish that superstition didn’t keep us in the shadows.” “Well,”’ Carton said as he walked Wanda to the door, “it looks like the Prescotts are keeping up their end of the truce because I don't think that kid has any idea about any of this, and hopefully he never will.”
Two weeks later, on the afternoon before the night of the full moon, Benny heard the sound of a bell, faintly ringing from the direction of the mountains outside town. Inexplicably, the sound called to him, drawing him like a siren song. Benny stepped outside and began walking toward the sound of the bell, slowly at first but soon, he was running. A car pulled alongside him as he ran. “Hey Benny, where are you off to in such a hurry?” It was the cop who had handcuffed him in Dean Carlton’s office, but he was not in uniform. “Uh, I’m not really sure, uh, I guess I am just out for a run.” Benny was confused and couldn’t explain to himself what was happening, never mind trying to explain it to a cop.
“You hearing the bell Benny?” the off duty policeman asked. “Um, yeah, do you hear it too?” the boy responded. “Yep, every month, since I was about your age, come on, get in, I’ll drive you up there, your mom will be up there too.” Bewildered, Benny got in and within fifteen minutes the car pulled into a clearing at the end of a steep mountain road and drove through an open gate.
Wanda’s face lit up with delight as she saw her son get out of the car. She ran to him and threw her arms around him sobbing with joy, “Welcome to the Pack son! I thought this day would never come!” Bewildered, Benny just stood there hugging his mom wondering what in the world was going on. Mr. Carlton walked over and put his arm around Benny, “Since your dad isn’t here to share this special moment, I would be honored if you ran with me tonight, Benny.” “Sure, I guess, Mr. Carlton, but I really have no idea what’s going on.” Mr. Carlton and Wanda both looked up at the rising moon as the final wisps of daylight faded, fur sprouting from their faces, “You will soon,” they both said simultaneously.
Devil's Moon Pt 2
The Hunters
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